The Old Harper House
Deborah L. Kanic
c/o On Target Words Company
4825 Cedar Ford Blvd, Hastings, Fl 32145 USA
9780692205914, $6.99 www.amazon.com
From the first sentence “The Old Harper House” is a prime example of what a writer should not do. The writing is stilted and slow moving throughout the rest of the book. A glaring mistake the author makes is the overuse of certain words. An example is “row” in the same paragraph four or five times.
“The Old Harper House” could have been a fun ghost story with much tighter editing.